Comic 99 - Things Change, page 25 of 25

3rd Sep 2014, 4:03 PM
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Things Change, page 25 of 25
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Author Notes:

3rd Sep 2014, 4:03 PM
Boy Phaff
I'd say that sets the stage. And I'm going to leave it set for some time. I want to try my hand at some sci-fi high jinks. Call it The Flip Side and copy-paste: http://theflipside.thecomicseries.com/

Comments:

3rd Sep 2014, 4:14 PM
cattservant
A rousing good tale!
3rd Sep 2014, 5:39 PM
Aahh...what a sweet ending.
3rd Sep 2014, 6:16 PM
Boy Phaff
Isn't it just..?
3rd Sep 2014, 5:45 PM
hrwilliams
Nice, distinctive, and well-done artwork. Great choice in fonts. Great use of color. I would recommend brushing up on proper punctuation -- you are using a comma without a clause, but rather for a dramatic pause, when a "..." would be better -- the sentence is also a run-on --- BUT I only say this because I think you're awesome and you'd probably appreciate the chance to improve. Lord knows I would!

So in short, keep being awesome, and keep up the good work!
3rd Sep 2014, 6:22 PM
Boy Phaff
Thank you for the praise and thanks for reading critically. The effect I was going here for, though, was a guy telling the story. ".." would be too literally, I think. Oh, and it aint no font hrwilliams, them's old fashioned hand letters. Thanks again.
3rd Sep 2014, 6:24 PM
Boy Phaff
literaturally...?
3rd Sep 2014, 6:36 PM
Boy Phaff
"prosaic", that's it...
3rd Sep 2014, 9:46 PM
chris-tar
I love the old man's expressions. Sad, happy, and reminiscent all at once. masterfully done.
4th Sep 2014, 3:27 PM
Boy Phaff
Appreciated, Chris-tar. It did turn out well.
4th Sep 2014, 1:09 AM
Notos
This was great, really slick art as usual, and always dig all the different heroes you come up with. Good luck with the sci-fi story!
4th Sep 2014, 3:28 PM
Boy Phaff
Much obliged, Notos. Thanks for reading and commenting.
4th Sep 2014, 4:19 PM
Beautiful story :-)

Totally unexpected (at least for me). Loved it.
I love how you work hard on your stories. So rare.
5th Sep 2014, 5:49 PM
Boy Phaff
Thank you, D.
19th Sep 2014, 3:09 PM
gary cramer
Boy, this needs to see the printed page. Thoroughly enjoyed the entire tale, both art and story are truly original. Not every super hero story line needs to have the good guys and bad guys in their normal roles. Well done, 5 stars for the whole thing!!!
20th Sep 2014, 12:19 PM
Boy Phaff
Thanks Gary! I do think though, this is way too inconsistent to be printed. Still, a lot of crap is in print of course..
23rd Jun 2015, 2:58 AM
SwordoftheManiac
Keep going!